Sunday, November 25, 2007

The rest of Chapter 12

“You know him?” Nikki exclaimed, pulling away from Ms. Arachne and running over to Jacques.
He sighed. “Sadly, yes. I used to work with her. But that was before she took her current job. We never really liked each other, but now...” he shrugged. “She’s always hated me. I don’t know why.”
“Why? You want to know why? I’ll tell you why. It’s because in programming I was the best, but because I was a girl, they ignored me. But you! Oh, you were their idol. They kissed the ground you walked on. I was just as god as you, but always in your shadow! It’s not fair! Not fair! Not fair!” she screamed. She looked like a giant two year old throwing a tantrum. A car drove by, and they saw a thirty-five year old woman, on the street screaming. The mom and dad in the car shook their heads, but the three and five year olds laughed hysterically.
Ms. Arachne noticed, and yelled, “Mind your own business, you little twerps!”
“Aah. Now I remember, you always hated kids, especially smart-alecky younger teens that gave you trouble.” Jacques said, with a wink at Riley, Kiley, and Nikki.
“Yes!! That’s why I hate Nikki and her friends, and want them locked away with her parents in Niagara Falls City!” Ms. Arachne gasped and covered her mouth with both hands.
“Nice one!” Bub laughed, mad that she told, yet glad that he was not the one in trouble.
“Shut up.”
“Yes, ma’am,” Bub replied sullenly. He did not like his new ‘partner’.
“Thanks for the valuable info, Ms. Arachne, or should I say, Ms. Wanda Rodes?”
“Hey! I’m not her anymore! I changed my name long ago! That persona is gone! I’m a new woman!”
“Oh?” Jacques said, raising an eyebrow. “That’s not what your passports will say!” he said as he walked over and grabbing her purse and pulled the two passports out. “Well now, look at what we have here! Says that your old ‘persona’ is still you. It doesn’t say anything about a name change. But, your other one says that Ms. Arachne is your birth name. Guess they’re both wrong, eh? And isn’t it illegal to have two passports?”
“You! Ugh! Jerk! I’m leaving, and taking this brat with me!” Ms. Arachne said, grabbing Nikki for the third time that day. Nikki tried to squirm away, but she made eye contact with Jacques, and she knew that she had to go, and they would follow. Then she would escape with their help and rescue her parents. Nikki sighed. Bub trained his gun on them so that Mrs. Pinebaum, Jacques, Riley, and Kylie would not chase them.

20 comments:

Danielle T. said...

i still need a title!! Got any ideas, anyone?

Alisa said...

Hey Danielle,
Mrs. Pinebaum is married, so who's her husband...Jacques?
We were just talking about the French name for Jack, is that where you got it from?
How about a title that kind of tells what the story's about?
Like, The Adventures of Nikki, Mystery of the Lost Parents =), or Unknown as in you really don't know what's going on until the end of the book!
What's going to happen next?

Danielle T. said...

No, i really don't know but that would be a good idea!
I'll try it out!
You were? I didn't know that, I just like the name. It's one of my old favorite authors last name.
Not sure what's going to happen next.
Does Nikki, Parent Finder Extraordinaire! work?
P.S. jk about Nikki, Parent Finder Extraordinaire!

Danielle T. said...

How about Nikki and the search for her parents?

Amy said...

The Adventures of Nikki: Quest for the Missing Parents

haha, I don't really know either. I have trouble coming up with titles.

Amy said...

Nikki, Riley and Kylie should be "The Tenacious Trio"

Amy said...

you don't have to listen to my suggestions...

anyone got suggestions for mine??

Danielle T. said...

That's cool! Should it be: The Tenacious Trio and the missing Parents?

Danielle T. said...

How about: Nikki, Riley, and Kylie, The Tenacious Trio!
Subtitle: The Missing Parents
;-)

Alisa said...

You guys are silly! I laughed at your comments. Danielle I'm sure you'll come up with something. =)
P.S. Yes we were when we saw each other at our flag football game with our family on last Friday.

Amy said...

The Practical Problem of Parents

Amy said...

haha never mind =)

Amy said...

Here it is:

The Practical Problem of Never Present Parents and the Pessimistic Presumptions of a Poor Person


.... or not??

Danielle T. said...

what's that pardner? Are you making a 'some sort of poem-like thing that i aint bound ta remember'?

Alisa said...

You'd better get a'postin' this thar month be almost over, vite, vite!

Alisa said...

Danielle,
Christine doesn't have a blog.

Danielle T. said...

oops!

Danielle T. said...

Everyone, I started a new blog, http://dani-surfergirl2.blogspot.com, because this one removed me as an author. So I will add you guys again. And I will post my whole novel so far on it too.

Annette said...

I like your story twist of having Nikki go with them so that Jacques could follow her to her parents.

I also like your detail of the children in the car driving by Ms. Arachne laughing at her when she had her fit. Very fitting (pardon the pun). :)

As for the titles suggested so far, my vote is for The Tenacious Trio with a subtitle of The Missing Parents. Then it sounds like The Tenacious Trio could be the name of the series, and the Missing Parents is episode one in their adventures.

Anonymous said...

I know i'm pretty late and haven't read the comments, but something with the word mystery in it may work.
Annette, thanks for stopping by. I actually just stumbled onto your student's blog. It wasn't through NaNoWriMo or anything like that :-)

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